{"id":186,"date":"2021-09-25T12:38:39","date_gmt":"2021-09-25T16:38:39","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/?p=186"},"modified":"2025-10-09T15:11:52","modified_gmt":"2025-10-09T19:11:52","slug":"researched-personal-essays","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/researched-personal-essays\/","title":{"rendered":"RESEARCHED PERSONAL ESSAYS"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">In the researched personal essay, students use their own personal experience &#8211; as frame, motivation, or a source of evidence &#8211; to explore a scholarly topic. They\u2019re asked to contextualize, complicate, or illuminate their own experience using research: statistics, theories, ideas, literary works, or other referenced materials.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Such pieces may<\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\"> \u201ctake the form of a personal narrative, a good way to ensure the article you are writing is based on your own thoughts and experiences. But there\u2019s no reason your article can\u2019t also include reporting, interviews, research, data, charts, graphics, and so on. A special word about personal essays: the best ones are built on a foundation of facts. These are not meandering stories. They have a clear thesis, near the top of the article, that provides an anchor for every word that follows. The question to ask yourself is: Which of the above components advance the story you are trying to tell in the most evocative and effective way?\u201d <\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">according to the former online publication <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Quartz.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><b>Methods<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Students are presented with a scholarly topic relevant to the course, then asked to bring their own personal experience to bear in order to illuminate the topic. Students may adapt a previously written academic essay (from earlier in the semester) into a personal essay, adjusting tone, audience, argument, etc.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Before writing, students should read effective examples of the genre, analyzing aspects such as how the writer begins their piece, how they maintain the personal connection throughout, their tone, how they employ research and facts, and the role of the writer as a character.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Students should be encouraged to employ extensive research in service of their topic, and their essay should employ a works cited list. They should further be encouraged to use their personal experience not as personal catharsis or creative expression, but as a literary device to connect their reader to their topic.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Students could produce essays like these for a class blog (see module <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wordpress-blogs-and-websites\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">here<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">), run on WordPress or another platform. First-years could be encouraged to submit their work to the Jacobson Center\u2019s competitive archive of exemplary first year writing, <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/smithwrites\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Smith Writes<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\"> (see examples below). Many online blogging platforms and publications can also provide homes for this kind of essay: <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Substack<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">, <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Medium<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">, <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">The Millions<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">, or <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Slate <\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">are possibilities, alongside dozens of genre-specific sites like <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Outside Online<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">. Literary journals that publish nonfiction are additional options (<\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Granta <\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">being among the most prestigious of the genre).<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>Examples<\/b><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Professional<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">An English professor might ask students to write an essay such as <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">this one<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">, in which the writer contemplates her personal fascination with fashion, and how classic literature reflects fashion\u2019s value in our lives:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/themillions.com\/2017\/10\/matter-survival-value-fashion-literature.html\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">A Matter of Survival: On the Value of Fashion in Literature<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Additional professional examples from Smith faculty &amp; staff and other writers:\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Lily Gurton-Wachter, \u201c<\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/lareviewofbooks.org\/article\/stranger-guest-literature-pregnancy-new-motherhood\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">The Stranger Guest: The Literature of New Motherhood.<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">\u201d<\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\"> Los Angeles Review of Books<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Naila Moreira, \u201c<\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.thecommononline.org\/to-autumn-reading-keats-in-pandemic-winter\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Reading Keats in Pandemic Winter<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">,\u201d <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">The Common.<\/span><\/i><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Jane Stangl, \u201c<\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/thesocietypages.org\/engagingsports\/2017\/09\/19\/golfing-with-the-ladies\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Golfing with the Ladies<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">,\u201d <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">The Society Pages<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Baumgardner, Jennifer, \u201c<\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.liberreview.com\/liberation-roundabout-theatre\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Liberation,\u201d Roundabout Theatre Company, New York NY; \u201cFree to Be . . . You and Me: 50 Years of Stories and Songs,\u201d The Eric Carle Museum of Picture Book Art, Amherst, MA; \u201cMacbeth in Stride,\u201d Brooklyn Academy of Music, Brooklyn, NY<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">,\u201d <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Liber: A Feminist Review<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Elisa Gabbert, \u201c<\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/reallifemag.com\/vanity-project\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Vanity Project<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">,\u201d <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Real Life<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Student<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">The Jacobson Center maintains <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/smithwrites\/archive\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">SmithWrites<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">, an archive of exemplary essays by first-years, submitted from the students\u2019 Smith coursework then selected and edited by Jacobson Center staff. Many of these pieces are written in researched personal essay style. Examples include:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Olohi John \u201927 &#8211; <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/smithwrites\/issue-5-fall-2024\/the-ban-on-the-burqa\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">The Ban on the Burqa<\/span><\/a><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Musayeroh Bah \u201926 &#8211; <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/smithwrites\/issue-4\/im-walkin-here-improving-walkability-and-public-transportation-for-all\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">I\u2019m Walkin\u2019 Here!: Improving Walkability And Public Transportation For All<\/span><\/a><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Aurezuh Sikes \u201926 &#8211; <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/smithwrites\/issue-4\/drag-as-corporeal-spirituality-at-smith-college\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Drag as Corporeal Spirituality at Smith College<\/span><\/a><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Shalom T Mhanda \u201925 &#8211; <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/smithwrites\/issue-3\/menstrual-hygiene-management-mhm-in-zimbabwe\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Menstrual Hygiene Management (MHM) in Zimbabwe<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">\u00a0<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Sarah Waring \u201924 &#8211; <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/smithwrites\/issue-2\/when-things-matter-signs-of-care-in-the-madison-community-garden\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">\u201cWhen Things Matter\u201d: Signs of Care in the Madison Community Garden<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">\u00a0<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">In <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">ENG 119: This Overheating World<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">, students selected an impact of climate change affecting them directly, such as in their hometown, a childhood vacation spot, or at Smith. Students conducted research to understand and contextualize the phenomenon (such as drought, new weather patterns, forest fires, species invasion or loss, flooding, poor harvests, diseases, or glacial retreat). Their essays described and narrated their experience, incorporating research from a minimum of five sources, including at least 2 scientific papers and 3 non-website sources.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">A piece from this assignment by Bushra Tasneem \u201820 was <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/smithceeds.wordpress.com\/2018\/06\/12\/climate-change-and-the-bleak-future-of-my-hometown-in-bangladesh\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">published in the CEEDS blog<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">, exploring climate change impacts in Tasneem\u2019s home country of Bangladesh.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Liber: A Feminist Review <\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">(<\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.liberreview.com\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">latest issue<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">) is a literary journal edited by Jennifer Baumgardner and co-written by Smith students. Sample pieces are available within the journal.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>Learning Goals<\/b><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Connect scholarly topics with current events and students\u2019 personal lives.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Explore differences and overlaps between academic and public writing in terms of audience, project, argument, evidence use, and motivation.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Consider voice and purpose, whether to inform, convince, or connect to others with similar experiences.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><b>Suggestions for Multimedia Expansion<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">This assignment couples effectively with <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/video-essays\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">VIDEO ESSAYS<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">. Students create a video version of their written paper using a sequence of still images or a video collage. The essay may be posted as a Smith blog post (<\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wordpress-blogs-and-websites\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">WORDPRESS BLOGS AND WEBSITES<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">) or on public platforms such as <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Medium<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">. <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Text-first broadcasts (<\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/tweetstorms-twitter-threads\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">view module here<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">), or Instagram (<\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/instagram\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">view module here<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">) can serve to encapsulate and bring public attention to the piece.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In the researched personal essay, students use their own personal experience &#8211; as frame, motivation, [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3782,"featured_media":30,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-186","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-modules","entry","tgrid"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/712\/2021\/09\/becca-tapert-GnY_mW1Q6Xc-unsplash.jpg","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/186","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3782"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=186"}],"version-history":[{"count":9,"href":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/186\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":331,"href":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/186\/revisions\/331"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/30"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=186"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=186"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.smith.edu\/publicdiscourse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=186"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}