Prose–>Verse

Take 1 prose piece you’ve written and recast it with line-breaks two ways — as a 1) narrative poem (a poem that tells a story) AND 2) lyric poem (a poem that uses language to evoke). You are not required to adhere to any metrical or formal elements or structures — both poems should be free verse.

10 thoughts on “Prose–>Verse

  1. Lyric:
    America, the four-step to disappearance
    the moment to moment upheaving
    the trampling breath
    the rush
    any minute now
    backwards into ocean
    the use myself up
    the now the now the now
    the dream: the punish what is soft
    the kill what is small

    America, the bending and the break
    the world between and
    the world deserved and
    the world unearned and
    the world made shell made placeholder
    made moment misfired
    made bird swallowed you whole

    America, the heat the hearth the heart
    the world unwanted
    the uninvited
    the promise
    the push the pull
    the plane cross-stitched
    with steel into my inner wrist
    the wound the holes
    the threaded limbs
    the leave now? you’ll bleed out
    the what is left to return to?
    not you

    America,
    step, spin, shrink, —

    Narrative:
    On winter nights, the winds. They don’t tear your roof off out here but they do leave you cold.

  2. Narrative:
    Lone seagulls exaggerated a walking gait as they traversed the sand. Others stood passively along the shoreline with closed eyes and one leg tucked. Small biting flies bothered mothers on the shore, too slow for the remaining children running to and from a beach blanket and the water. Low, sloping dunes grew long fronds of green. They provided cover over invisible crickets, beginning to practice for their dusk drone. Small spiders sped in different directions, disrupted and disturbed, quickly disappearing behind divots and dips left from footprints. The movement of the animals is negligible. Never noticed unless keenly observed. A waning moon posits itself over the tallest of the beach grass. Solitary and separated from the dim heavenly bodies beginning to show themselves high in the sky.

    Lyric:
    Lone seagulls exaggerated a walking gait as they traversed the sand
    While others stood passively along the shoreline
    With closed eyes and one leg tucked into themselves.
    Small biting flies bothered mothers on the shore,
    too slow for the remaining children running to and from a beach blanket and the water.
    Low, sloping dunes grew long fronds of green
    that provided cover over invisible crickets,
    beginning to practice for their dusk drone.
    Small spiders sped in different directions as they’re disrupted and disturbed,
    quickly disappearing behind divots and dips left from footprints.
    The movement of these animals is negligible,
    never noticed unless keenly observed.
    A waning moon posits itself over the tallest of the beach grass,
    solitary and separated from the dim heavenly bodies beginning to show themselves
    high in the sky.

  3. NARRATIVE:
    It is raining but it always rains here.
    The temple glows by candlelight
    a golden Buddha smiles down on us.
    It’s grandiose,
    all red pillars and gilded edges.
    We stand next to each other,
    strange and new,
    my twin sister on one side,
    my best friend from home on the other.
    A monk walks by
    The length of our shorts feels sacrilegious.
    Lightning flashes
    it does not deter those who have come to seek comfort amongst the deep red-blue-greens of the temple walls
    the lanterns that flicker above.
    On the steps above us, they bow.
    The more bows, the more devout their wish.
    In each of our hands is a colorful votive
    carved with the animal zodiac from the year we were born.
    They beg us to write our wishes on them,
    We are too shy to respond to their calls.
    I hold the ram’s head in my hand,
    knowing exactly what is written on my heart.
    I hide it anyway and write down something paltry,
    a deformed wish about getting good grades.
    Still, I turn it away so they can’t see.

    Lyrical:
    It rains; the rain never stops
    The temple glows by candlelight
    a golden Buddha smiles
    red pillars and gilded edges.
    We are strange and new
    A monk walks by
    We are suddenly sacrilegious.
    Lightning flashes
    Amongst the deep red-blue-greens
    of the temple walls
    the lanterns flicker above.
    On the steps above us, they bow.
    The more bows,
    the more devout their wish.
    We hold candles we are too afraid to light,
    they ask for our wishes
    My heart is bare on my face.
    Still, I turn it away so they can’t see.

  4. The Chef’s Dance:
    She shimmies through the kitchen,
    aromas of fresh baked bread,
    lobster, potatoes all around.
    Grips the wine glass, it is her life line, her breathe
    of freedom.
    The kids bicker upstairs, she sighs,
    “Alexa turn up three levels”.
    Dancing through the smell of fresh food,
    cooked with love,
    she sips her wine,
    finally smiling.

    The Chef’s Dance:
    Mother dances around the kitchen.
    The kids are fighting again, it never ends.
    Alexa plays best of the 80’s and mother sips
    her wine.
    This is her haven.
    This kitchen. The smells. The food. The mess.
    The food is cooked with care.
    She plates it like art and takes a moment
    to appreaciate,
    what others won’t.
    “Time to eat”, summoning the others.
    Freedom, over.

  5. 1. Narrative
    Snow, cold, downhill.
    Boarding across the hill.
    Angling towards the tree ready for the jump.
    Prepping for the landing.
    Where did I go?
    I can’t breathe
    Where am I?
    Someone needs to help me.
    How do I get out?
    I’m in a tree.

    2. Lyric
    Cold, wet, tired
    Wind whips across my face
    Jumping is the goal
    Feeling free in the air
    Bend and push
    Breathe
    Darkness, cold, immobile
    Where can I go from here?
    Stuck, scared, alone

  6. Lyric:
    Cinnamon. Cloves. Chilies. Star Anise.
    Sizzling and crackling,
    the smell of garlic and onion
    floating in the air.
    Shrimp flying in the air,
    eggs being cracked.
    Her excited face behind the wok,
    waiting for her turn to come.

    Narrative:
    Cinnamon. Cloves. Chilies. Star Anise.
    Some of the ingredients
    that the man had just thrown into the wok.
    Her mouth was salivating,
    thinking of the shrimp and the eggs,
    and the garlic and the onions.
    Dreaming of the moment
    when those sizzling noodles would hit her mouth,
    as she stood close around the wok,
    waiting for her turn to come.

  7. Narrative Poem:

    Inauguration, a new beginning
    Preparation for a new beginning is always long and tiring
    Cut 3 pounds worth of carrots, onions, peppers, and garlic
    Making sure there is enough for every dining hall
    I take my dirty cutting board and knife to the student worker
    Who is on dishwash duty
    But the student worker is grunting and struggling
    All of a sudden there is a gush of blood all over the walls and floor, and in a second, she is on the ground with only one arm

    Lyric Poem:

    Chop, Chop, Chop the carrot
    Chop, chop, chop all the vegetables
    As if Boldo is coming alive
    Showing us all the deliciousness of what food should be
    BOOM
    AHHH
    SMASH
    Only 5 feet away, and chaos
    Dark red substance oozing everywhere
    Limbs flying around
    And so, the end is near

  8. Sunday
    The door opened early during Sunday services,
    a sliver of light chased Diana through the entryway.
    She closed it softly behind her,
    pausing
    diffused sunlight of the cloudy morning
    falling into the dim, low nave.
    She plunged her hands into the stoup, focused on
    ritual instead of the religion.
    The rinsing of her hands, the cleansing.
    The water swirling.
    She wondered what exactly they thought they were cleansing from her,
    from her body.
    She could feel their eyes, their whispers.
    May judgment day come to us all.


    Sunday
    Soft sunlight behind her, warm. The church, cold.
    Darkness, candlelight.
    Some hidden thing in the altar.
    Shadows flickering. Devotion, teeth behind velvet.
    Marble under frigid water, hands rinsing sin. Singing.
    The holy, the sacred eating the fire.
    Religion, ritual temptation.

  9. 1) Narrative
    The synth-pop sounds fill the crowded room
    Bodies clash against one another
    feeling the beat of the music.
    Heads are bopping,
    shoulders sway,
    knees bending on a 4/4 count.
    Heat radiates off the walls,
    just wanting to be free for one night.

    A thin woman sings on the stage.
    She sways her hips from side to side,
    glitter on her eyelids,
    red light reflecting off her face,
    belt loosely hanging off her dress,
    she holds on to her mic.
    Her dress flows with her movement;
    she is the movement.

    Friends twirl each other as they giggle.
    A couple looks endearingly at each other,
    you can see the desire in their eyes,
    the way their lips slightly curl up into a smile,
    slightly parted,
    wanting more.

    You bend your knees at the beat of the song,
    you shake your shoulders awkwardly,
    your friend encourages you to keep going,
    to dance, to not be stiff.
    You jump up and down,
    wondering what is happening.

    You start feeling yourself;
    your body,
    recognizing that you don’t have to be afraid.

    You are free.
    You are in this moment.
    You are infinite just this night.

    2) Prose
    Heat.
    Sweat.
    Clashing.

    The intensity bubbles up in the pit of your stomach.
    A burning sensation,
    clawing its way out within you,
    reaches out,
    grasping for freedom.

    Intoxication fills the air.
    Your body sways, free from its constraints
    Free of restraints
    Your desires are no longer tied back

    Bodies sway,
    feeling the intensity of their natural drives,
    No longer keeping their distance.
    It is raw,
    Real.

    Lost but not lost.
    The innermost thoughts escape.
    Free with your movements
    Rushing, gushing, out of you.

    Do not apologize,
    Not for your actions.
    Bubbling sensations,
    Bubbling euphoria.

    You are infinite.

  10. Lyric:

    He’s suffocating. Trapped in limbo, yet the world
    is still moving, slipping away and
    leaving him behind. Somehow
    oblivion feels as natural as breathing.

    He drives to escape
    a never-ending maze
    of crisp white walls and sterile floors,
    watching as the car winds up the path
    to the abandoned farm, a dilapidated treasure
    hidden between acres of deciduous overgrowth
    and golden fields of hay,
    where with each turn
    he is deeper in the forest and farther from
    home.

    The barn’s rusted weathervane
    comes into view, and suddenly
    he’s gasping for air, clawing at the invisible hand
    squeezing him by the neck.
    The sight of the farm
    brings back a flood of memories, welling up
    and filling him with such heaviness
    that he can do nothing but
    drop to his knees and let them
    wash over him all at once.

    His wife is his oxygen,
    and now he can’t breathe.

    Narrative:

    Narrative:

    He’s running away from the hospital, driving to avoid
    crisp white walls and sterile floors.
    The car hurtles along the winding path, passing
    acres of deciduous overgrowth
    and golden fields of hay
    on its way to the abandoned farm,
    hidden deep in the forest and far from
    home.

    He spots the barn’s rusted weathervane
    and suddenly he’s gasping for air,
    choking
    from a flood of memories,
    filling him with such heaviness that
    he can do nothing but
    drop to his knees.

    His wife is his oxygen,
    and now he can’t breathe.

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